This Bitter Earth

Glenbrook South

Live Event Coverage Performing Arts

Entry Description

A video except from Glenbrook South's live variety show displaying congruence and fluidity in live directing.

Judge 1

Positives: You got some great angles and pans in this piece and changed them enough to hold the viewers interest in what was otherwise, a mellow performance. Had it been high energy, you wouldn't have needed to make as many cuts. Your blending transitions made for a smooth ride.

Improvements: I realize there are time limitations, but if you are going to include any of the applause, you need to take in more of it than you did here. Also, make sure no part of the shot is peaking even if that means allowing a darker background.

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