Wrestling

Deerfield

News Package

Entry Description

Gwyneth Helm reports on the fearsome Warrior wrestling team.

Judge 1

Positives: Good scrimmage shots. Nice framing on the interview shots. You followed the rule of thirds. In addition there was something interesting in the background during the interviews.

Improvements: Add a lead to the story. Gwyneth Helm is never seen. She closes out the piece. But that's the only time she is heard. Try to get b-roll from some of the meets. Get some closeup action shots. If done properly that will help to capture some of the impact of the sport.

Judge 2

Positives: lots of sound bytes, interviews were framed nicely

Improvements: too slow-paced, too much dead-time between sound bytes, would've liked to have seen video of an actual match, as well as close ups during practice, outside of the close, no reporter presence at all

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