Road to State: Warrior Dance Team

Deerfield

Documentary

Entry Description

Marnie Kritzman follows the Warrior Dance Team to State in this intimate cinema verite documentary.

Judge 1

Positives: I loved the intro. I believe the story is solid and has some great emotion. I liked the use of many different elements (interviews, NAT sound, Back stage...)

Improvements: The audio edits were very distracting. I understand how difficult that is but a little more time on the audio would have made a world of difference. Some content cuts of other dances were rough and also could have used some lower third ID so we know what we are looking at.

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