Syria PSA

Glenbrook South

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

This PSA, created in conjunction with the STAND for Peace club board, is designed to raise awareness of the atrocities being committed in Syria today.

Judge 1

Positives: Good job with the lighting, the subjects look good. The reactions from the students after watching the footage comes across as real and helps convey the message of the PSA.

Improvements: It would really get the message across if you edited in some of the footage that these students watched as they expressed their reaction. It may be hard to watch, but without knowing what they are reacting to it's not easy for the viewer to empathize with their reaction. I'm very happy to see the use of a backlight, but try to put it someplace where I won't see it.

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