Sober

Kelly

Music Video

Entry Description

This music video creatively explores the highs and lows of teenage love...

Judge 1

Positives: great lighting in the opening shot, full values of lights and darks are exposed with a good level of contrast between. love the 360 shot around the talent great following shot exiting the train.

Improvements: The narrative structure could have been improved, I didn't quite understand what was happening -- perhaps introduce the female earlier. Also, there wasn't much character development for the female, who is she? Why should we care about her if she isn't in any scenes?

Judge 2

Positives: You successfully told a story without having to be overly obvious in your scenes, which is not an easy thing to do. I really enjoyed this work. The contrast between the sepia and full color scenes worked really well. The video had a dream-like feel to it, which was nice. Nice job on the stabalization with your shots, especially on the rotating panning shots. Nice job!

Improvements: I have to dig for improvements here, but perhaps cut clips a bit more. Also, clean your lens when shooting outdoors!

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