The Prom Committee

Maine East

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A two-camera documentary-style comedy.

Judge 1

Positives: The interaction between the actors was convincible. The editing made for a good story flow.

Improvements: The scenes need lighting. I can appreciate the hand held camera movement for this type of video, but you need to stay close to proper framing so it doesn't become awkward.

Judge 2

Positives: Love the two-camera docu style and you did a great job of capturing the humor in not only the entirety of the story, but of the individual opinion as well. The reactions seem genuine, which is where the humor lies. Well done.

Improvements: The dialog was sometimes hard to comprehend becasuse of the placement of the boom mic. The story of the # was great, you don't need to do convolute it with other plot twists and additional stories.

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