LAX

West Chicago

Animation

Entry Description

A lacrosse head magically comes together of its own accord in this original stop motion short.

Judge 1

Positives: Your photography is nicely exposed and lit. The early sections where you are painting and decorating the frame are among the most interesting, because of the whimsical way you move the tiny pieces around, and how you used the colored paper as a device for adding on the colors.

Improvements: I think this could be edited down quite a bit - perhaps to half of its current length. Many of the actions that you animated, like all of the lacing-up of the net, become repetitive once you've established them. If you sped some of the stages up after they got started, it would keep things moving and help the pacing. Also, some sfx might add interest to the different stages of assembly.

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