Stop Lock Turning

West Chicago

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

A recurring nuisance is addressed in this light-hearted, original PSA.

Judge 1

Positives: -Lighting and the way it was shot looked great, the sepia tones fit with the story and PSA "voice" - Good use of editing.

Improvements: - Your music and sound is too loud and competes against your subject. - In terms of your story, I had no idea what lock turning was until the end, I would establish that sooner. - Ending shot was pointless, you have a good PSA I didn't see the need for the jump kick at the end.

Judge 2

Positives: -Lighting and the way it was shot looked great, the sepia tones fit with the story and PSA "voice" - Good use of editing.

Improvements: - Your music and sound is too loud and competes against your subject. - In terms of your story, I had no idea what lock turning was until the end, I would establish that sooner. - Ending shot was pointless, you have a good PSA I didn't see the need for the jump kick at the end.

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