Elf On the Shelf

West Chicago

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A very mischievous Christmas elf wreaks havoc in this playful original comedy.

Judge 1

Positives: The elf character was engaging. Good use of a variety of props to keep the story interesting.

Improvements: Camera movement a little choppy at times. Always use a tripod with a fluid head unless the moves are intentional. The audio transitions were somewhat abrupt. Fades instead of cuts were have been more effective.

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