Seven Eleven: Episode 1

Riverside Brookfield

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

In this hilarious and original scripted mockumentary, producers Lisandro Resto and Rosie Nolan take you behind the scenes at RBTV. Meet Resto and Nolan's fellow producers Nathan Perez, Colin Hughes, Kevin along with their supervising producer, Gary Prokes.

Judge 1

Positives: The audio mix was well done. The edits kept the narrative flowing and understandable.

Improvements: Some dark and flat scenes. The video could have used lighting. There was text used that could have been in a larger font and held longer.

Judge 2

Positives: I enjoyed the way it ended with Nathan Perez not saying Versace.

Improvements: This short didn't seem to have a story at all. I understand it was a "day in the life" type mockumentary, but there was no movement or progression with characters.

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