One student learns a valuable lesson about snacking cleanly in this original PSA.
Positives: - Your comedy worked well, which is no easy task - the dramatic music along with your story line was funny. - Good use of different camera angles.
Improvements: - editing in transitions, watch for flash frames! - music was a little loud and competed with your nats
Positives: - This is funny. - The music you selected adds to the comedic value.
Improvements: - Your "PSA" is humorous, but I would work toward sharing more impactful messages. - I'd like to hear more of your voice.
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