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Lake Forest

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Two hipsters go toe to toe naming their favorite band.

Judge 1

Positives: Very creative script. I liked how the discussion continued throughout several scenes. Nice edits.

Improvements: Some of the audio had quite a bit of hiss. Some shaky camera work was a bit of a distraction at times. A tripod would have been nice.

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