Driving Drowsy

Lake Forest

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

3 out of 5 Teens Drive Drowsy

Judge 1

Positives: - Your story was clear, and the camera staying the same place gave the PSA a very modern, high production value look and feel. - The editing to the beat of the music was done well and you stayed on each shot just long enough - never felt like it was dragging.

Improvements: - Balance your nats just a touch better, sometimes the sound would compete with the music and other times it was over powering, your ending crash sound could have been louder for more of an impact on the audience -Watch your lighting, it seemed bright in some places and too dark in others. Its tough to do when you're shooting inside and outside.

Judge 2

Positives: - Nice fast edits! The edits perfectly illustrate the busy life of a teenager. - Good job including a variety off b-roll in 30 seconds!

Improvements: - I think you could include more driving shots to drive your message home even further. - Getting to the the statistics earlier would be stronger, until waiting until the very end.

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