There is always a Second chance...

Lake Forest

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Entry Description

There is always a second chance, don't always rely on a first impression

Judge 1

Positives: - Your use of camera movement was really good I liked the variety despite being in one setting. It added a lot to your story. - The different music for different ages fit well, it was reflective the girls age throughout.

Improvements: -Sometimes your shots were a bit bright and a tad over exposed but others were fine. - Your music transitions could've been a little smoother.

Judge 2

Positives: - Love the idea of a girl growing up with distracted driving and then having to make her own decisions behind the wheel. - Very important issue to tackle!

Improvements: - Your message is lost by the end. I don't understand how the "second chance/first impression" relates to distracted driving. - If you use several instances of cell phone use to illustrate distracted driving, it makes the dad eating the donut seem out of place. I suggest using all cell phone examples or includinga couple of other types of distracted driving.

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