Teen Pregnancy

York

Music Video

Entry Description

An abstract music video for Blank Banshee's Teen Pregnancy.

Judge 1

Positives: I love the entire feel of this video, the imagery is amazing. It has a great cosmic feel. The motif of circles, infinity, sine waves totally goes with the theme of the song. The skateboarding and basketball are dope, I love the shapes and the connected dot stuff.

Improvements: Definitely make videos as much as possible and push yourself creatively to develop more content. Start sending this to ad agencies and writing to animators asking for internships.

Judge 2

Positives: It was a creative idea to go with annimation in your video, something I haven't seen in other entries to this point. By doing so, it was more visually appealing.

Improvements: The risk in going with animation is, you can get caught up in the graphical elements and forget about the story line. I can read into some of the choices and how they might be part of the overall story, but it felt a bit more as if certain elements were repeated to fill time and it got away from the story.

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