Toaster

Lyons Township

Commercial

Entry Description

This is comedic commercial for a toaster.

Judge 1

Positives: Very funny. The shots are beautiful and the actors are keyed almost flawlessly. Creative use of watermelon.

Improvements: The audio could be blended better and fade out at the end. It seems to cut off. The female character would be color corrected. She seems a little washed out in front of the white toaster.

Judge 2

Positives: Strong humor. Great use of a greenscreen. Liked the slow pan of the pb&j, that was great.

Improvements: Music could have been stronger. In using the humor and trying to emphasize the cliche 'ad' technique, I think you could have pushed this even further.

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