GHS Preschool

Geneva

News Package

Entry Description

There is are new students walking the halls of GHS

Judge 1

Positives: -great use of b roll. Edited and shot well -nice story telling

Improvements: - needed a little more energy in the narration track - could've lit up interviews a little more

Judge 2

Positives: Very conversational! The visuals and the interviews were very engaging and active. great job. I love that you started out with a soundbite- makes the piece immediately engaging. nice job with the story telling behind the day and how this is helping students. excellent energy

Improvements: The beginning needed to start off a little stronger with exactly what GHS is and why you are highlighting it but I did really lke you made the piece very conversational! a couple of the bites needed to be smoothed out a little in edit but overall nice job. way to use ambiance under your vo.

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