Don't Let the Memories End

Homewood-Flossmoor

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

PSA that looks at how short life can be.

Judge 1

Positives: Message was clear. The music works well with the video.

Improvements: Video was kind of dark in places and the white balance was a bit off too. Use some more nat sound to help convey the emotions of the "memories"

Judge 2

Positives: The story is very clean and clear, nice camera work. I can tell you put a lot of thought into your shots.

Improvements: I would have loved to hear a little more nat sound from your characters, that could've added to the story. Also be aware of your lighting and color correct, some shots were too warm and others too blue.

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