Football - Salute to Service

Lyons Township

Live Event Coverage Sports

Entry Description

This is an excerpt from the live coverage of Football at the Salute to Service game.

Judge 1

Positives: The replay animation and actual look of the replay were tremendous, especially for a high school production. I actually loved the line "he's in my creative writing class", as it really added the prep feel to the game. This would not work in a college or pro broadcast as well, but it was great for this type of game.

Improvements: You need a little more emotion on big plays. Also, while you can reference the other talent's name from time to time, there was too much of "Tommy" in this short clip. Not needed. There were obviously multiple cameras used, so after the TD, we needed to get to the hero shot a little quicker--instead of sticking on the wide shot.

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