Amino Energy Pre-Workout Commercial - ID# 104
Marist
Commercial
Entry Description
This commercial displays the effects of Amino Energy. The beginning before I take the pre-workout and after taking the pre-workout.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/27 6:55 am - Always use a tripod whenever you can when shooting footage. On a few shots, there was a slight zoom in on the shot - if you’re going to zoom, make sure there is a purpose for it. Good use of music to help distinguish between the 2 parts of this commercial.
- 3/6 8:23 pm - I like the concept of the commercial, but i think that it can move even faster. The start of it is not really needed because I do not need to see where you are working out, I just need to know that you are working out. I would possible get rid of a couple of the parts in the beginning where he is having issues with working out, and that will allow it to move faster. Also, watch the transition for the music. try to make it as smooth as possible when using two different songs. Do not make it overly distracting with something like music. I know you are in a business, but the lighting is a little dark in this environment, look for a way to boost it.
- 3/5 10:55 am - I think the biggest issue with this story is your lack of diversity with your shots much of your video is shot with these wide cover shots that are hard to edit together, why would you want to edit them down – it will make your story move faster when you have those close ups. Close ups like the pained face, stuggles with lil weights etc. It will allow your audience to know what is important and you can get to your point quicker. Your keys were a little hard to read, the music splices are a little awkward, and be careful to let your audience know what it is a commercial for until the second half, I thought it was a commercial for x sport fitness.
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