How To Make A Pizza - ID# 108
Marist
Demonstration
Entry Description
This is a demonstration on how to make a pizza.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/7 11:18 am - A nice idea for a demo-perhaps create a title for your show? Overall, could have benefited from more pre-production planning, including a v/o narration, shot variety, wardrobe, background, products being pre-opened, etc. Keep up the work with an eye to making everything in the frame intentional.
- 3/7 11:02 am - Your show showed the task in a thorough, step-by-step manner. But the production value was lacking in several aspects. The master shot of your pizza making was fine, but you needed additional shots to keep the audience engaged. High angle shots, inserts of hands, shots of individual ingredients would help to vary the imagery and add to the overall appetizing quality of the final product. Pay careful attention to your graphics. The word, "toppings" was misspelled. Finally, provide a context for your viewers. Why should they watch this show? What does this demonstration provide for the viewer? This question should always be answered, as it helps hook the audience and help them gain knowledge by watching your show.
- 2/24 12:12 pm - Not a lot of shot variety; this could be significantly more engaging if you varied shots WHILE you prepare the pizza. Move the camera above for a high angle shot, move it to the side for some close ups and extreme close ups. More lighting. Anything with food needs to be lit extremely well. It's all about the details. #5 has a word incorrectly spelled - should be spelled TOPPINGS. Kind of important when you are relying on text for each step and you don't have a voice over.
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