The Lost Labradoodle - ID# 102

Marist

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

"The Lost Labradoodle" is a movie trailer about two labradoodles, Bella and Daisy, that are the best of friends. One day, Bella is taken away and Daisy decided that she couldn't just sit around and wait for her.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 1:24 pm - This is a very cute story. There is some room for improvement when it comes to the camerawork and storytelling. The camera is often handheld and shaky. There could also be more shot variety--a lot of shots are wide. There is a lot a lot of text explaining instead of showing us or putting it in a voiceover.
• 3/5 10:18 pm - The concept is cute! If this is a movie trailer, try not to give your ending away! If I know how a story ends, why do I need to see the film? You have to leave your audience wanting to know how a story resolves. Never give a way the climax or resolution. I think you needed a human element to this story. The story also needed some spoken words. This was too much for an American audience to read. Vary your shots up and keep working! The idea was good, but keep studying trailers and try to mimic their execution.

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