Hidden Talents - Kevin - ID# 115

Oak Park River Forest

Documentary

Entry Description

This is the first episode of the Hidden talents series I create about Talents that OPRF students possess.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 10:21 pm - Not sure if this is truly a documentary or just a profile piece. It was visually strong and the story was told reasonably well through your subject but I struggle with a 1:33 documentary because it isn't enough time to get into who he is and why this matters to him.
• 3/6 9:49 pm - Great idea and would love to see a finished version that is more developed and fully realized. Nice work on the creative shots and perspectives as he worked, that helped bring his passion to life. I was waiting to hear something from the guitar at the end to prove that it actually worked. It would have been great to see him working in his actual class at school with the teacher he was talking about.

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