Derek vs. Darien - ID# 110

Marist

Documentary

Entry Description

A documentary about two notorious ping pong playing high school sophomores that made a BIG NAME for themselves at Marist.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 10:14 pm - Technically difficult to watch, camera is shaky and a lot of zooms throughout make it tough to watch. The montage at the beginning gives it a mockumentary feel and I really don't know if this is a real story or not. You really need to make the viewer care more about these two competitors and why we should be invested in this story and the eventual match.
• 3/6 10:14 pm - Fun play on the documentary style to tell the story. The jump cuts on the audio just didn't work, often they cut off what each brother was saying and was overall really distracting. The shaky camera was also really hard to watch, a tripod will go a long way in making something like this better- especially with a game like ping pong.

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