Catholic School Girls - ID# 112

Marist

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A movie trailer parody on the infamous movie "Mean Girls." This trailer gives you insight on what really happens between girls in a Catholic school.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/30 10:55 am - Positives: The story of this is very funny! I enjoyed the writing. Clever, over-the-top, enjoyed the voiceover. Improvements: Camera composition. The background of an interview should tell us about the character--your interviews take place in front of the same blue curtain--have variety in your background. Audio Levels are low at times--could benefit from using an external audio recorder
• 3/5 10:44 pm - The parody made absolute sense, but it was confusing in places. When you introduced your characters through voice over, you didn't always show their faces, so as a viewer, I didn't understand who I was learning about at all times. You needed specific hero shots that introduce each of your characters/plastics. You have a great foundation for your story, but your camera execution needs to match it.

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