Trailer for "The Ghost of Eduardo's Past" - ID# 129

Morton East

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Movie Trailer for the dramatic video production "The Ghost of Eduardo's Past".

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 10:57 am - Some of the shots were well composed and were high quality. The story here is not exactly clear. I understand that we are seeing his ghost but why? I think we need to learn more about Eduardo. This could have benefitted from a voiceover to provide more explanation--why are we in a school? We need to hint at more of the story. The font choice is very basic. At the end, the text is also not centered.
• 3/6 4:55 pm - Some of your camera shots were well framed and you did a good job of establishing your character's fear. Effects worked well in places. Your trailer needed additional characters and story. He needed a companion or teammate in this fight. Basically, I wanted to get to know your protagonist a bit more through the trailer. I understand he's running from his ghost, but why? How did he get here? Some of these questions needed to be answered to make the trailer more compelling.

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