E-Skateboard Commercial - ID# 135

Riverside Brookfield

Commercial

Entry Description

A student wakes up and is going to be late to class. He rushes through his morning routine and grabs his electric skateboard. Thanks to the reliability and speed of the electric skateboard he makes it to class on time. *NOTE, The rights to the song used in the commercial are on file with my school

Recent Teacher Comments

• 2/27 2:49 pm - loved intro scene as it indicated you were late or rushing to get somewhere but then the tag line does not relate to the story or the product which is an electric skateboard.. I think if you just change the tag line to something like "gets you there on time" then it would be a more effective commercial

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