The Waste Shed - ID# 138
Riverside Brookfield
Natural Audio News Package
Entry Description
A look into a creative arts reuse center based in Chicago with its founder Eleanor Ray and assistant store manager Francesca Dana. In this natural audio news package the two discuss the purpose and importance of reuse and recycling and how they’re trying to help their community.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/15 3:07 pm - Great audio edit. Great movement in footage. Great composition of shots. Great information and a clear story. Really liked it.
- 3/7 11:19 am - Great story well told. I liked your roll focus shots, they added to the visual interest of the story.
- 3/6 6:09 pm - The story is 2 minutes long, but it looks like you never checked your final render to see that there were some extra clips hanging out there in your time line.
- 3/1 3:50 pm - This is overtime. Make sure that you pay attention to Try to show the subject a little less when you are using B-roll. Don't just put them up on screen for a second then remove them. There is great information in this story. I like the framing of your shots, and the lighting is very good as well. Also, the b-roll you use matches up very well with the audio.
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