Paintball Explosion - ID# 149

John Hersey High School

Commercial

Entry Description

This commercial entry is for Paintball Explosion in Dundee, IL.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 2/27 1:48 pm - Show actual paint balling good music some good action shots edits good but the contents of shots need more context where is this place seems like a trailer rather than a commercial

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