Mary Poppins Promo - ID# 142

Oak Park River Forest

School Promotion

Entry Description

A brief look at Oak Park and River Forest's latest show.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 4:48 pm - Great job showing the scope of the production; good mix of action and interviews; B-roll needs more variety in shot composition (mostly long shots); smooth camera movement is well-done;

Judge 1

Positives: -The tempo of the edit matched the music. -The shots were lively and kept the feeling of fun. -usage of the light while maintaining an attractive shot worked well.

Improvements: -For the length of the promo, I'd have expected more insight as to what's going on. -Nitpicky, but there were a couple instances where I thought natural sound would have invested me more.

Judge 2

Positives: the camera worked was very nice and stabilized. the audio from the interviews and the song were of good quality. nice lighting and exposure

Improvements: put the camera on a tripod for the interviews, cut to different shots faster(faster pace)

Judge 3

Positives: nice editing to the beat of the music. good variety of shots

Improvements: Could have been a 1:00 promo, a little too long A lot of the same looking shots throughout the promo

Judge 4

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