Holiday Write Night - ID# 15

Lyons Township

News Package

Entry Description

This was a news package about Holiday Write Night, a tradition at our high school that brings together students and student groups with the community.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 11:29 am - Story was explained well however it would have more effective to have a reporter introduce the soundbite. B-Roll matched the information presented and was well shot. The story is missing information to make it a complete news package.
• 3/5 3:49 pm - The interview could have been better lit -- a little dark. This could have been edited better -- more interviews establishing the personal connection to the event instead of just the basic information about what was happening at the event. The b-roll was good, but it would have been better to hear from some of those faces.

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