Scrapping Grades - ID# 159

Crown Point

News Package

Entry Description

CPTV’s Jack Gardner investigates foreign education policies and their implementation in our school system.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 10:52 am - Great background for the stand up The back to back to back to back to back soundbites could have been broken up with a narration track but was somewhat effective in telling the story. The camera work was effective but could have been more creative in telling the story. All audio and lighting were effective. Very interesting and well written story.
• 3/5 3:13 pm - While the opening introduces the concept well, I think it could have been more concise. We can get to the awesome interviews and b-roll a little faster. Perhaps, you could have cut that opening reporter monologue and created a voice over that helped transition between sound bites to make a more cohesive whole. A great variety of thoughts and opinions. Well done.

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