LTCC 4th Annual Car Show - ID# 16

Lyons Township

News Package

Entry Description

This is a news package for the 4th Annual Lyons Township Car Care Car Show in May of 2016. This was the largest event yet for the club, with dozens of feature cars and special projects, as well as demonstrations and competitions.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/5 3:20 pm - Although this is well filmed, it doesn't really seem like a news package. It is somewhat informative about the event, but it doesn't have a narrative with a purpose. It's almost more of an infomercial for the event. The music is too loud and distracts from the interviews and reporter. The b-roll is edited well to the music, and the shots are composed well.

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