Drunk Driving PSA - ID# 165

Highland Park

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

This PSA was designed to warn high school students about the dangers of drunk driving.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 9:12 pm - Very strong composition and well executed. Good use of sound and voice over. Excellent use of graphic titles at the end. Well done!
• 3/4 2:14 pm - Good visuals and movement. Well written. First graphic should have been up longer. Didn't have time to read it. Last sentence needs a period. Music fits well.

Judge 1

Positives: Good job conveying the message

Improvements: I know it isn't easy capturing everything you are looking for, but when he says he liked watching the birds you should show some birds in the trees

Judge 2

Positives: Nice gradual reveal of information. Nice shots. Solid work.

Improvements: When it's a dark subject of loss, use all dark tones of light ie. white door that shut - not good. You keep one tone throughout - sad. Might a build up of sad from slightly happy be better - and not just in words of the script - but in pictures too. Some hope of joy, then down. This gives the audience more contrast (of tone) - thereby making a stronger impact often.

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