Deerfield Rd. Construction - ID# 160

Deerfield

Natural Audio News Package

Entry Description

Nic San Jose investigates the wide economic impact of the Deerfield Rd. closure on nearby businesses.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/15 3:15 pm - Solid story. Good variety of shots. B roll kind of generic and it didn't really help to tell the story. Composition of interviews well done. Lighting and exposure on some interviews could have been improved. Great audio edit.
• 3/7 11:22 am - Nicely done, good sources of information - Missing key info though - When will it be done, why are they doing it, why is it behind schedule?
• 3/1 4:05 pm - You cant talk in this at all otherwise it is not a nat pack. As for the story it is well laid out and the story is clear. I wish that there were more Nat sound pops in the story to help create a bridge from one topic to another. The interviews are pretty well framed, and the sound bites are clear, and help tell you story. Watch zooming in on shots , instead just make and edit or keep the shots tight.

Judge 1

Positives:

Improvements:

Judge 2

Positives:

Improvements:

Judge 3

Positives:

Improvements:

Judge 4

Positives:

Improvements: