MMEA Fest

A girl falls into the wrong crowd with a deadly consequence.

3/6 7:51 pm - Excellent quality of the video- looks very professional. The acting was a bit suspect at times, including the fall and the struggle for the phone. Continuity issues with the eye glasses during the fall- on her face, then off. The story itself was pretty good- well told, and nice how it goes back to how it started in the end. Some of the shots were a bit long, and was hoping for a few more close-up to extreme close-up shots with as much emotion that was in the story. Watch the slight movements of camera at the end of shots. It may sound small, but in a few spots the camera is on a tripod with a great steady shot, but then moves just slightly which is very distracting. A solid video. Maybe think about adding a singer to the music video- could add a lot to the emotion of the video. Nice job.
2/28 1:00 pm - Good storytelling and pacing. The shots at night are a little dark.

Positives: Nice job with the "letterbox" setup your lighting was well done. The story was easy to follow without being too obvious.

Improvements: Audio on the music was too hot and may have been clipping.

Positives: Story and characters good, but needed some clarity. Good Camera work.

Improvements: Lighting at points was so dark could not see what was happening.

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