No Backpacks PSA - ID# 207

Oswego

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

An informational piece reminding students not to bring backpacks to class.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 9:13 pm - Really enjoyed the underlying humorous tone to this promotion of a school rule. Very well shot and use of sound was terrific. Point made in a fun and direct way. Nice Job!
• 3/4 2:25 pm - I'm a little confused. You say no backpacks in class, but then you show the bad effects of a bully with a backpack in the hallway. I am not sure if you should have this much hallway information and hardly anything about the classroom. Too much black in video. Narrator sounds like he is reading and is over-modulated.

Judge 1

Positives: Good camera work

Improvements: I understand using the text at the end but too much black

Judge 2

Positives: funny idea, and the freeze-frame reaction edits are great

Improvements: a little anti-climactic; feels like there's a building of tension as he gets closer to his classroom, but then the last section in the hallway he barely runs, there's no one around, and no real climactic point of conflict.

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