Tinnitus by Everyone Says - ID# 211

Bremen

Music Video

Entry Description

Love is complicated especially when you evaluate the relationship in this music video for the song Tinnitus by Everyone Says.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/3 2:56 pm - The video's story is very slow moving and difficult to follow. There seems to be a lot of wasted time, where long scenes make things move really slow. There's too much "talk"- where your actors are talking and we have to try to figure out what they are talking about- there's just too much of it. You chose to use some audio from the original shots, and I question some of it. The part they actually talk in the video is inaudible- and not sure why some of the other ambient noise is kept in the video. Song and video just end abruptly- is it over? Actors were not very convincing. Make sure every shot is planned and setup to look just the way you want it to. Good camera angles- lots of variety in the shots. Overall, the video had potential, but failed to keep the audience's interest.
• 2/28 12:34 pm - Good attempt at illustrating how difficult relationships can be. Shots are a little dark at times. Some of the shots are dark and out of focus.

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