Tural's Story - ID# 221
Glenbrook North
News Package
Entry Description
This News Package tells the story of the comeback of Tural Erel, a student a GBN who, over the summer, dove into a sandbar and became completely paralyzed. He went through a lot of hard work to get back to the pool to swim at senior night, only a few months after being totally paralyzed.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/7 11:39 am - Inspiring story. The interviews at the pool were visually creative but audio was distracting. Footage of PT was powerful and really enhanced the story. Need more light at the interview location as well.
- 3/5 3:59 pm - Audio in the interviews is not great -- would have been better had you used a microphone or interviewed them outside of the pool. The pool is great for a background, but if we can't hear the story, it doesn't matter. Good use of natural sound and b-roll. The lighting is a little dark throughout. This is a great story to cover, and I think that, overall, it is done well.
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