Super Smash Bros. GAME OVER - ID# 234

Batavia

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A fledgling Smash Bros. player, Jeff, and his friend Dylan, attempt to beat their rival Dan at a Super Smash Bros. competition. Original length was 7:02.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 2/28 9:37 am - Some decent work here. Your shot composition is generally on the right track but lacking attention to detail. Your story, although a little generic and underdeveloped, is at least complete and comes to a reasonable ending. Your lighting is consistently a bit dull, and I’m not crazy about your audio. Overall, I have to say, this feels more like a student assignment than a festival-worthy entry. Having said that, keep at it. You’ve got the right foundation here to build on in your next film.

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