Fratello's - ID# 235
Homewood-Flossmoor
Commercial
Entry Description
Real commercial for local restaurant
Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/7 8:37 am - Terrific graphics/animation. Good editing to the pacing of the music.
- 2/27 2:24 pm - Good animation some shots too rushed opening graphics look too clip art great pacing good edits with music message clear
Judge 1
Positives: 1. Great editing & use of animations to enhance the story 2. Great camera work & high energy music matching the quick shots
Improvements: 1. VO would have been appreciated - even just the end with a tag line for Fratello's . 2. The ending seems a bit abrupt, would have been nice to see some transition in to a tag line or something bringing it all together.
Judge 2
Positives: The music has good energy - it conveys a friendly, upbeat environment one might like to visit. The rapid pace of the edit works nicely with the music, and works to further convey upbeat energy.
Improvements: STORY - this piece lacks a narrative or any sales copy that distinguishes Fratello's from any other restaurant. SOUND - the audio cuts off too abruptly at the end. CAMERA - there is a scene starting at :11 that pans so quickly you cannot see what's supposed to be there.
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