All Around - ID# 236
Homewood-Flossmoor
Cinematography
Entry Description
A collection of shots from various projects.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/6 8:09 am - great used of rack focusing and tracking,
Judge 1
Positives: Composition, rack focuses, and camera movements were done very well.
Improvements: In a reel, audio (especially interview / dialogue) feels unnecessary. Also, the shots with the girl and balloon don't match the lighting, movement, and overall execution of other shots.
Judge 2
Positives: The composition on most of the shots were well done and the lighting, mood, transitions and music of the videos worked well together. I also liked your use of depth of field.
Improvements: Improvements would be to take out distracting background noise of some of the clips and if you need the audio of the clips make them more pronounced. Pans and tilts should be smoother. If you don't have a nice tripod to help you with pans and tilts then do the best you can and add a smooth filter in post. One pan of city at the beginning of video was way to fast. Over all nice job!
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Judge 4
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