Girls Basketball - ID# 245

Deerfield

Natural Audio News Package

Entry Description

Entering the season with a huge challenge of having all new starters, the girls basketball team is working hard to build a successful team.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/15 3:11 pm - Composition on some shots weak. Not sure why footage was chosen to tell the story. Composition nice in coaches office. Needed ambient/natural sound mixed in with his interview. Otherwise solid audio edit. Good story. Some footage out of focus.
• 3/7 11:41 am - Nicely told story, I got a good sense of where the team is at this year. Use more b-roll, we sat on the interview of the coach for too long.
• 3/1 3:58 pm - Great nat sound pop at the start. Try to add in more natural sound, or mic the coach when he is talking to the girls, put a mic on him when he talks. Don't just trust the camera mic. Also, you can get great natural sound of the ball bouncing or a shot being made. Overall great story. The fact you talk makes it not a Nat sound pack.

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