How to Survive the Outdoors - ID# 246

Homewood-Flossmoor

Demonstration

Entry Description

A funny look at how to survive the cold outdoors.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/27 8:54 pm - The humor was noted, and it did make me laugh at times... but not sure it all fit. Audio could have also been tweaked. I would have also liked a bit more shot variety.
• 3/7 10:29 am - Really like that you added 'clean up' disclaimer at end. The comedic idea you had for this was good, but it seemed to lose a lot in translation to film. Needed more thorough pre-production planning and scripting.
• 3/6 9:36 pm - Amusing twist on the demonstration show genre. It had it's funny moments but it needed a larger sense of purpose to ground the comedic moments.

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