This is a real demonstration which attempts to focus on the steps involved in making dank video memes. I try to provide some context as well, for those who aren't familiar with the genre or terminology.
Positives: Interesting examples.
Improvements: Not really a demo of anything. Missed the category.
Positives: I thought the creature was a fun element. The editing process itself was the clearest part of the video
Improvements: I think that you needed to have a script. This was a big topic. the editing was shaky and if it was on purpose...it needed to be clearer. Bigger editing jumps. The meme at the end could have related to the meme that was created.
Positives: Very interesting message. You explained the process of making a meme from start to completion in a simple and non-intimidating way.
Improvements: Show more completed memes. You can use them in the introduction or at the conclusion. Try to avoid jump cuts during the narration. You can use b-roll to cover up some of the cuts. You did that when you were talking about connecting memes to a specific song.
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