National Freedom Day - ID# 267

Metea Valley

News Package

Entry Description

February heralds Black History Month. But often overlooked within the month is National Freedom Day. Here, reporters for the television show, The Mane, explore what makes this day so special.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 10:42 am - The editing of defining National Freedom Day was creative and really enhanced the story. This was very informative and well written. The narration tracks really creatively combined the soundbites which really make your story informative. All audio was perfect as was lighting. The footage from the films was distracting and took away from your story. Replacing your own b-roll with the footage from the films could have made this package more engaging.
• 3/5 2:55 pm - That opening shot of Abraham Lincoln on horseback doesn't seem necessary. I actually prefer this story without the b-roll from films. I think this story would be more effective if the shots were all from Metea and the student body. You have enough engaging b-roll that shows the diversity in your school. The sound bites are well organized and interesting. A great variety is displayed. Video and sound quality are great.

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