Making the Grade - ID# 274

Eisenhower

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

The project is about two kids, one smart and one goofy. The goofy kid leads the smart kid on to a plan that is going to fail and the process repeats.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 2/28 3:24 pm - You’re on the right track in several areas here. Your story, although it’s not especially original or well-developed, makes sense and ends with a fun twist. Keep working on this area and on developing your dialogue because good filmmaking skills without a good story to tell don’t really get you very far. You’ve got the right basic sequencing here, and the same for your shot composition. It could use some more artistry, but I like that you’re starting to play around with unique angles and visual storytelling techniques. Lighting, for the most part, is good. My biggest critique is probably your sound. You have significant hiss and background hum. Not sure what happened there, but it would great to eliminate that moving forward.

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