Abuse - ID# 270

Homewood-Flossmoor

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Abuse with a twist

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/27 12:40 pm - Very strong message. The lighting, color and sound throughout the video set a perfect tone and the reveal was on point. Lacks a little information at the end but overall well done.
• 3/5 2:41 pm - Incredibly powerful. I watched this with my students and you could see the reaction as it slowly started to down on them that she was an animal. The music was well done, and the vo at the end came in wonderfully. The end title was powerful, but where would we go if we wanted to stop animal abuse?
• 3/1 11:51 am - Was not expecting the animal abuse- very good. Actress voice was clear. Maybe a website/phone number for animal abuse would be beneficial at the end.

Judge 1

Positives: Ending was the best part. Opening left audience with little to grasp onto - just odd.

Improvements: Bring music down, too much. Interesting twist that could be lost to an audience because of woman being abused. That resonates larger. Need a cleaner, maybe more obscured, closer shots of abuse. Audience tends to identify with face and eyes. Good effort.

Judge 2

Positives: Nice concept and well edited

Improvements: lighting and color could use more work

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