Snake Eyes - ID# 287

Geneva

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Sleepovers are normally full of games, jokes, and laughter, but one legend curves these two boys night in a spooky direction.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/27 4:21 pm - The strongest aspect of this piece is its cinematography. Your visuals are vibrant and crisp. Stylistically, could your use of color and lighting schemes have changed as the night progresses? In general, your editing is polished and your audio track clear. Your piece's narrative progresses in a satisfactory manner, but you may want to think about how elements in your film's setting conflicted with the narrative. For example, much of your film looked like it was shot during the day rather than at night or early in the morning.
• 3/7 9:02 am - Dice spinning effect was cool special effect. Use manual iris for light changes.
• 3/4 12:53 pm - Great cinematography Great sound Good acting Good, subtle use of music A shame the story does not add up to more

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