Krispy Kreme Opens - ID# 288

Homewood-Flossmoor

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Entry Description

Grand opening of Krispy Kreme Homewood.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 11:13 am - Very well written story. The development of the story took a creative twist when you added the winner of donuts as well as interviewing Carlos, and the mayor. This could have easily been a story about Krispy Cream opening up but you took the storytelling to a whole new level. Creative footage enhances the story. Really liked the ending but wish you would have reshot it as there is a car alarm in the background.
• 3/5 3:41 pm - Opening shot is very good. Light exposure was off throughout. Very dark to start. Carlos Larcada interview does not allow nose room. Odd composition. Shot isn't steady. B-roll is interesting and and matches your story. The voice over is well written and engaging. Ending is cute.

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